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短短3-4年英文進步神速,
尋日我叫佢寫d嘢, 如下:

Intuition

Now my mind is blank. It feels hollow and I’m temporarily indecisive. The thousand thoughts that once lingered has relinquished just as I realized that summer has arrived – once again.
Whenever there is a slight thought of summer: my mind falls into a deep trance and I feel myself being wasted. Somehow, I feel sadness in the air – I swear that there’s something ominous. Everything seems to be fading away, as the eerie silence approaches. My cogitations evanesce as I start to lose focus. The world around gyrates in an uneasy manner. I feel like I’m drifting into a vacuum. Then, I start failing to comprehend anything that stands before me. Everything seems so blurry in my eyes when there’s a metaphor present. I feel lonesome when I gaze outside, but I cannot fathom why it is so. I feel that it’s better if this had never betide; now everything seems so void.
Outside, it is cold, dark, and windy. The atmosphere isn’t all that great. It feels tranquil and lonely whenever I think about it. The wide-open space makes me feel free, but inflicts nostalgia. It sort of feels bitter, on the other hand, it’s a relief to be unsanitary. The feeling is sort of like when you’re in the wilderness; where you are surrounded by "mother nature", except, you can hear cars that relentlessly drive past.
These days I’ve been busier than I had ever been before. I find my schedule to be crammed and discover that my appetite is dwindling. For the most part, I find myself to be inactive; I stay home most of the time. Yawn….this is getting monotonous.
Time passes so quickly that it sometimes makes you regret. Also, there is nothing you can do to stop it. All good things must come to an end—I disagree.



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回覆 #1 鳳梨 的文章

Wow! Very good!

Guess this boy is very brilliant and work very hard.
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